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it was pretty good.

However, I am a fast reader, and I was unable to read the introductory material.
you should make it go slower, or include a button that takes you to the next screen of text.
other than that you have a good concept.

excellent work!

You shouldn't include an apology in your descripion. Really.
The music sounded great.
Your style; mixing body armor, cloaks, and the wild west, really piqued my interest.
overall, I like it.

A great trip.

Kind of like the Red Balloon or the Red Violin in structure, I like the story.
Would have given you a perfect ten if it wasn't for the self-pity stuff about women. That always bores me.
Otherwise, a very wonderful piece.

Excellent!

Oh I loved this game. It's been a long time since a game made me sweat!
Nice touch on having big papa change strategies on the last couple go arounds, by the way...
I think it's crazy people complaining about the difficulty. This game was gloriously difficult.
So look... A crow in hell, right? Hell is the worst place you can imagine, right? SO WHY THE HECK SHOULD THE CROW EVER GET TO LAND OR TOUCH ANYTHING??? Crows LOVE landing and touching stuff. Use your symbolic heads.

fun yo play and good concept

I just wish it looked like mercury. That silver shiny color would look so so so cool.

pretty good.

I liked the concept and the game.
I found a bug.
On the falling level, I went out of the screen to the right directly after falling from the green door. I was unable to get back on the screen or fall.
Game over...